Amazing.
So different and unique.
Yet, I feel the emotions that you're trying to portray in the poem.
You're really talented as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I don't know if i understood it the way it was meant to be portrated but the way i read it and the emotions i felt from reading it were very strong and thats something a good poettess is always striving to give her readers.
And you my dear, achieved it effortlessly. Thats the reason your on my faves =)
5/5 as always
*Gem*