Wow that is an awesome poem. Are you christain? I didn't think there were much pp on this site who were...or believed in jesus in general! That was an awesome poem. I've never been able to write good christain poems. I hope you didn't have to go thru this but its still awesome!!

Chelsey, this is superb. The rhythm is a little off, but I love the poem and the way it is written. The words of a broken and almost defeated soul. Keep fighting. Keep writing.

Hey hun a very touching piece. lot of emotion comn thourhg. i liked its structure. very powerful lines xx

Oh Chels dear heart this is such a sad write but you have pinned down the emotions and feelings so well.

Warmest regards,

Steve

I especially liked this poem. Very well done. 5/5. Now I know why you have a Top FAvorites award. Keep the amazing poems up!!!