Comments : The children sing

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    I like your view of the nursery rhyme kinda twisted but yeh tis all good. laura xx

  • 17 years ago

    by hayley

    Absolutly true. Your poem speaks the truth and I'm glad someone finally wrote about it. Great poem keep writing.

    Lots of love
    hayley

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Good poem i liked it. Means a lot. Ryhming slacked a lil but other than that it was really good, keep it up 5/5