I have to say i totally agree with your words, so true. a nice poem with a perfect message which was written greatly, keep up the great job like always. another 5/5 from me like always.

This was very well written, flowed well.
I had so much expectation and was very pleased not to be let down, i love your poems, you have a talent.
keep writing,
love Tara-Kay

Very nice. Flowed well =] Great job. Keep it up!

--Mel--

Excellent write. I really enjoyed how you posed in depth questions followed by your opinions asanswers. The flow was undisturbed and the idea behind the poem was very unique

I really like this poem because its so true. if you really deeply love somebody you pull out all the stops to be happy and you never once think that you can be hurt. But most of the time in the end thats what happens, life without love is not possible. Amazing poem 5/5

Brill woop woop i love it more than mine:( u beat me thats not fair hahaha ur a gr8 writer joe so dont waste ur tallent.
TINSLEY xXx

Wow.. i really like this poem.. the words are so true and honest.. its beautifully written.. spectacular write!

Agree wth all comments its really true n gr8 ....5/5

God bless u

Joe, I absolutely loved this poem. I honestly don't know what to say about this one.
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"Hurt by others,
And the one's they love
Hurt for the simple reason,
That they are not loved back."
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^^ Those were my favourite lines. Excellent write!! 5/5

-` Poetess

True message here. I found a typo:

You may ask what I mean
And I will answer you simply and "plain"
People who love, tend to care a little too much
And in the process, they tend to get hurt
I am sure most people can relate to this as even the most hardened of hearts still needs love. Nice job!

This was simply amazing! =]
The whole poem all I could sit here and think how true this was but some never seem to realize it.
You ended the poem perfectly, the flow was smooth, and overall the poem was excellent! =]
Keep it up, you've got a lot of talent! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow, Jobo!! I totally agree with what is written here. This was so amazing. I loved the ending.. It was so perfect. I did, however.. find ONE typo:

You may ask what I mean
And I will answer you simply and plan [''plain'']

Other than that.. it was just absolutley amazing. Very beautiful write. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x

This poem is great. Your words are so true. Life without Love is nothing.

Keep up the good work.

Kalee

I enjoyed this poem. I agree with the things you have written. I know the feeling of being without love. Your last line sums it all up.

This is another very good poem joe, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

This piece definitely makes someone question love and life, no doubt. And every stanza flowed perfectly to the next. Excellent structure.

Just amazing. Keep your head up Joe. Ily.

Stina
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I liked this poem. it had a real good message to it.

Congrats on HM in the Erotic contest this poem is very good and easy to relate to.

Wow.. i really love this poem. I love all your poems. Keep at it hunn. You got talent.
KissKiss

Very very very true poem.. i love it .. spectacular write.. strong and again simple words.. however the message still gets across clearly with meaning.. great job!