by TeAr dROp Jan 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You're the only one |
Aw.. this is cute.. sad but cute.. i like it alot.. but the last line is too long and doenst flow |
Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors such as "hold" instead of "hole" and "whats" instead of "whets" this poem is excellent! Keep up the good work! |