The glisten of the saviour

by Espoirfailed   Jan 11, 2007


The sun rises
So far
So near
But standing here
It won't illuminate
Me
I'll have to wait
And see.

Strapped in
Sinking down
Slowly dying
Softly crying
Sinking down
Floating up.
My world is stuck.

The walls drip
Their false illusion
Perfection tales
My confusion.

The glisten of the saviour
My one and only razor.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Wow. This poem had a rush of sadness in me. I felt like I was in the poem Great Write.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This is some deep deep stuff ilove it

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Ooooooo i LIKE it! so inspirational for a writing piece. your writing helps me improve my writing. keep it up and thx for the comments! they mean a lot to know that ppl read and like my poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by missy

    Wow! great job, so dark and intense. This is a kind of poem that grabs my intrest 100%. Loved it!

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