Had some pretty good detail in it
though you should have made it longer
with such a good topic like that.
great job from what you have
5/5
~MF~

I think it's fine the way it is. you have a great talent. this is beautiful. wonderful detail and everything is in place. 5/5

It could have been longer, but it was excellent. Loved every single thing you said, because it's just so unbelievably relatable. Get out of my head lmao.
5/5 for sure.