Oh this is dark. just all the words i would have used to describe dark.

perfect, very clever. 5/5

david

That's a cool poem. lol evil dudes need to look at this if they want to be evil lol
5/5
-vino

Excellent word choices!

You seem to have a knack for cutting to the chase. your poems make interesting reading.

Jemma

Interesting way to describe something, i like it.

Great poem. It is very original and interesting. Wording is superb and topic is excellent. 5/5

A very original dark poem. Your choice of words were great, which is good since each held one word. 5/5

marcella

Omg! I liked this! haha this was very unique. I can't really critique this type of peom so instead I'm just going to say I really liked it and It was incrediably incrediable. :] Also, a manual into the dark side isn't very evil.. but i still love it haha very creative. :]