This is a really good poem brit, (only my opinion) but the 4th line could go
"Always and forever, we will be." but thats just my opinion, but this is beautiful, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!

This is a wonderful poem, it's really sweet!!i like the first line of all of them, how u changed it, but u kept it the same at the same time (i know what im trying to say...). it's really nice that you could write that, i'm glad that you found someone! great poem! 5/5!!!

*Shawte*

WOW!!! I love this poem a lot its sweet... You should write more poems like these it's a good change... :) I like the flow and how everything fits together well... You are talented poet... I say 5/5...

Awe, how sweet. A life of love, I like it! Very nice job!

This poem is very good. I liked the way the worded everything. Good job. 5/5. Please comment on mine if you can. Great poem.
Crystal

Wow, that is so danm beautiful! lol! amazing work, your rhyming is perfect and not at all cliche! great work!
Love Steph!

That was a beautifully penned piece. The flow was great and undisturbed. The rhymes had equal syllables and were easy to read, none seemed forced. Your adoration for this person is quite clear and expressed wonderfully.

Excellent 11/10

We leave with footprints in the skys
is a fantastic bit of imagery, love the ending very much! good work!

Beautiful poem, very relaxing. For some reason, any poem at involves footprints, catches my attention. Very enchanting ending. Keep it up

Oh my Britt, this was beautiful, it blew me away. I loved the detail and the way you used the footprints to represent love, and life. I really like the end, the part about footprints in the sky, it was so well worded and..beautiful. Great work Darling.

--Steph

Oh by the way I noticed a typo:

"We're though this life, won the race."
Shouldnt that be "through"?

I liked this poem. it had a regular rhyme scheme and read quite well.
it was well thought out with the 4 stanzas showing the progress of your love. and it is a deeper poem than it at first appears. i liked the last stanza how when you die you will still leave traces of your love in the "sky". though the second line of the second stanza doesn't quite fit in properly to me. but that may just be me. good work

Rocky

Awww such a sweet poem, great rhyming and flow and the imageary was great too. 5/5

OOHHHHN! I really love this poem

Aww... i absolutely love this poem!! its soo sweet.. and its written very nicely .. the imagery and rhyme was perfect.. the flow was good.. spectacular write!

What a lovely poem. The last stanza really touched me.

Oh wow. this was just beautiful. everything flowed so wonderfully and the rhyme scheme was lovely. an excellent write! 5/5

Yet again, great work!

I've already commented on this poem, but i want to once more just to tell you that this is one of the sweetest poems i have read in this category. beautiful imagery and lovely choice of words [:

This is such a sweet poem i love it!! it made me smile!! all ur poems are excellent!!
5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace