Cute! Love is all things....you said it perfectly.

Rachel, I am so glad you posted this one. It makes you happy as you read this. Excellent job!

Thats gorgeous, it'a really really awesome. It's so unique, i can honestly say i;ve never read a poem like it
It's excellent, easily one of my faves from you =)
5/5
*Gem*

Absolutely brilliant!!
I loved your idea for this poem i'd have never have thought of doing one like this. A joy to read you are a very talented writer and i'm enjoying reading your work :]
5/5

I was absolutely taken by this write. It was so upbeat. The theme was sentimentally unique and the rhymes were original. The end just threaded it all together! Well done for sure 5/5

Ha! This poem made me smile. You did a wonderful job at this. I'm recommending you. I haven't found anything wrong at all with any of your poems. You are amazing! I can't choose which part I love the best. Excellent Job Babe!

5/5

No end to this???......colour (uk) family?
I would love to pick them all....
but flowers are best left for all to see...
beautiful...shimmmering gold of a million suns....love is.. like your poem

A very unique poem and I love that it's original! That's hard to find on any site. So 5/5 for originality! But I was thinking that this line...
So many colors , how could you just pick one?
Gave me probs when I was reading. It through the flow off to me. Just a suggestion, but I did like the poem.
Congrats on winning!
Charisma*

This was really cute, the lines were really well put together. well done
keep writing,
much love, Tara-Kay

Im speechless thats a very good poem you said it very well

keep writeing x

This is a very good poem keep up the hard work

OMG excilent poem very creative...i love it

Jerah Alaine

Interesting...**

Awwwwww!!! That was sooooo cute! ^-^ I loved it alot! All the words just flowed off the page, and how you did the color thing is great. Never understood why someone must make love red, though. Red seems more like the color of lust and anger. But, omg, this was cute! heheh I'll stop now. ^-^

Whoa that rocked!!!! heaps kewl...cleverly written!! keep it up! x x x phoeb

Cute .. rilli rilli cute
i luv it
but i dont bleev in luv anymore!!

ORIGINALITY

ORIGINALITY

AAAWWWW this poem was so CUTE!!!! it made my day!

It is very different. I like this.