This is a great poem! i don't really know what to say, it's amazing! i love your choice of words. ur an amazing writer! graet job!

*Shawte*

This poem just has a proffesional feel to it
It has a debth that inspires me to ponder. I like the format, which gave a special balance to this well written piece

I like the feel of this poem. Very vivid imagery and good word choices. Well done! 5/5

Wonderful!!! usually i dont like reading poems with long lines but your words were so deep that it didnt matter...great use of words...i love it!

Great poem keep it up ...you right really cool things.

Great job. i really like the rhyming scheme!!! Such a delicate morsel to be forbidden I held,
Deep within as the storms of gods quietly quelled.

that line sounds amazing. great jobbbb

"Such a delicate morsel to be forbidden I held,
Deep within as the storms of gods quietly quelled" This s written flawlessly. I must this is sixth one I've read now and all of your writting is amazing. I really don't know what else to say. 5/5

marcella

"These burning bridges died, yet they will not capture me."

I LOVED that line!
Who voted this down? Stupid people.
The wording and imagery in this were breathtaking, I really enjoyed this.

Ok. I liked the use of alliteration in this piece.
The subject was different. However, (I don't know if my brain's out of focus but...) the overall message and subject was a little loose and even unclear. I got the jist, but parts seemed to waver off into descriptions that were hard to decifer. That may be why it was down rated, simply because it's hard to follow.
Other wise it was good. There were obviously many descriptive words which many poems lack. The rhymes were decent too.
Keep writing.

Wow.. this poem is soo amazing.. the flow is perfect and the word choice spectacular.. and the last line was KILLER!.. really great job!