Bad Day.

by BrixGoesxRawr   Jan 12, 2007


Eyes desiccated from crying abounding, unsaltened tears.
Telling me you're going to walk away from me.
Even after all these boundless affectionate years.
Boisterousness shouting, things being pulverized.

One argument after the other, will they ever end?
I can't take all of this affliction anymore, baby
All I do lately is sit and contemplate as my tears descend
Don't pack your stuff, baby.. Don't go

I know I have made my own mistakes.
And innumerable I haven't learned from.
But I'll unquestionably do whatever it takes.
I'll change my ways, as long as you stay.

We always work through these things.
Cos that's how much we adore each other.
Stronger affection, is what it brings
Baby, it's just another bad day.

Brianna Carter
January 11, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    An excellent usage of words. You did a great job on this poem, it was very sad but had a nice ending.
    It flowed well and was nicely written... Well done.

    Thanks for entering my contest :] xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Breezy.. it seems like someone out there doesnt like you very much. You are a talented poet, and these poems are definitely worth something. Keep on writing! Don't let anyone stop you!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Everybody has bad days, but in a relationship you have to get passed the hard times to enjoy the good ones, amazing poem 5/5 hope your days get better