Feature Bride

by Beautifulwreck_112   Jan 12, 2007


As i watch her lay in bed
I gaze upon her resting head
Her breathing slow,
she barley sighs,

Not a flicker from her soft eyes.
I lay beside my feature bride
Fear is washed away, like a
ocean tide.

So beautiful, warm and caring.
lucious body, cant stop from staring.
full of thought, love cant be bought.

Deeply yearned, yet only earned
True love is rare, so full of care
Not just lust, but also trust.

My body rest with my true love
Mind soars the Sky's above.

( my boyfriend wrote this for me.. one of his first poems in a long time..comment no it and Tell me what you think..because he thinks that hes horrible and I'm trying to prove that hes not

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  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Tell your boyfriend that this poem is very beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Hi, tell your boyfriend, he's a really good author, it's really good. ~SAM~

  • 17 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Gr8 Work Here... I enjoyed it ESP. the way you started off so strong!