You

by Shelly   Jan 12, 2007


You always leave me wanting more
laying here on the floor
wishing you were here to
pick me up & wipe away me tear.

you\'ve got me knees week & shakin
you have my heart bent & breakin
you have my life upside down
you\'ve left me lookin like a clown.

Im not shore bout the ending on this so let me kno what u think please

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  • 17 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Aww. i liked this one lotz.. n thanks for ur comment it meant a lot, haha well thank u very much i like to think im pretty good at writing, i dk. but of course id love to help you and my first tip would be to try n make ur poems a bit longer short ones are good but sometimes the longer the flow the better off it is, plus it gives u more of a chance to dig deeper!! haha but all in all 5/5

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