Aww. i liked this one lotz.. n thanks for ur comment it meant a lot, haha well thank u very much i like to think im pretty good at writing, i dk. but of course id love to help you and my first tip would be to try n make ur poems a bit longer short ones are good but sometimes the longer the flow the better off it is, plus it gives u more of a chance to dig deeper!! haha but all in all 5/5