I LOVED THIS POEM!!! IT MAKES ME WANT TO CRY BECAUSE SHE DIED BUT HAPPY THAT SHE IS WITH HER LOVE..GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP!!!! |
by Delie
Wow you can really see how you miss your husband but that you're coping with it i don't relaly know how you feel, but with this poem we can see it exactly! very beautiful poem! |
by Yu Lee
Love it |
This is superb...simply outstanding, you are one shining star of this site dear...shine all the way. |
by Boy
Thts a great and lovely poem i wish you gd luck take care keep it up. |
I love this because it remindes me about me and my bf he is leavin me inmay to go out to sea he is in the air force i feel i can come and read this poem and feel good because he will come back because of this poem |
I love this because it remindes me about me and my bf he is leavin me inmay to go out to sea he is in the air force i feel i can come and read this poem and feel good because he will come back because of this poem |
by kallie
Very well written!! i like it alot!! the words are powerful and you create a picture!! beautiful job!! keep it up!! |
by Jen
This poem was really emotional for me! i really enjoyed it! THANK YOU FOR BRINGIN BACK SOME OF MY LOST MEMORIES!!! |
Beautiful.... |
by cindy Maahs
Wow that was intense and yet so beautiful. so sad but yet so happy. I know what you're feeling and Im glad you wrote this poem to tell everyone else. |
by cindy Maahs
Wow that was intense and yet so beautiful. so sad but yet so happy. I know what you're feeling and Im glad you wrote this poem to tell everyone else. |
Awww.. sad but sweet.. and romantic.. i love it.. you have talent for writing about love.. keep it up! |
by tlangelani
This poem sounds very sad but thank you very much for reminding us that people we love who passed away from this world remain with us in spirits and in our hearts. GREAT POEM! |
by Sarah
Wow this is such a beautiful poem it almost brought tears to my eyes good job... |
by Jenni Marie
This was beautiful!! |
by Curry
Wow i love your poems! you are an amazing writer! |
by Gauraw Patil
I just read your Love's sweet release.. I thought that was the best one.. But you proved me wrong Cindy.. This one is really very impressive... |
by Baby Rainbow
That's a very powerful ending, the image of this happening is made very clear. well done xxx |