Gem,
Great poem. This is so true as in any relationship you have to keep the line of communcation open. Excellent job on your poem.

Amazing as you already know! I could relate to this a few days ago before....well, yeah, you know. But anyways, great job. And I will definitely comment if I need to talk. And I think I'm gonna write about it :)
xoxo

Very sweet. I am glad Marcus appreciates your gift of poetry. Nice write.

Great use of words. alot of heartfelt and tuching lines. lot of emotion. keep it up xx

Very nice. It's good you don't just "drop it" all that means is it will build up to be bigger and harder next time.
One typo.
Cos it we don't talk it though
should be "if"
See ya!
Charisma*

This was a good poem. lol. I can't believe you gave it to him after a fight though. That's kinda silly. 5/5

Why is it kind of silly eh??
We worked it out because of it, so i owe a lot to that bloody poem!
So c\'mon, why is it silly? He reads every single one of my poems so it makes no fu(k1n difference if i give it to him!
I\'m stressed at the moment, if you can\'t tell. I have a lot going on