Aww so sad this is kinda lyk the one i just submitted but still different lol
i luv this stanza
'Baby even roses withers
A fire also dies
Chocolates may melt
And I hope you know that...
Just like my feelings for you'
great job

Haha ty...that poem's for my friend who has only eyes for this filippina guy over at the states...

Awesome poem, i can relate well with this, and thank you for your comment, i appreciated it very much...read the others if you like, i will read more of yours also, i enjoy ur writing very much, keep it up, 5/5