by kiara Jan 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
So here we are once again |
by heather
AHHH OMG OMG! i fell in love w/ this poem! really great job!!!!!! |
by Robie Lincer
Really really nice poem! |
by Gasttlee
Sad and lovely! Every word is appealing in many ways! 5/5 |
by Krzysztof J
This poem brings back bad memories for me, i cant comment im sorry, it has good flow and great wording, im soo sorry but thats all i can say :'( |
by Chelsey
Kiara, Tammie took my words! haha...no but I do agree with her your rhymes (at times) seemed a little forced which through off the flow a bit. But I really enjoyed this because it reminded me of a movie...Lovers, where one has lost feelings for the other yet when he kisses her she can't resist herself to kiss back...good story line, I liked, I liked! |