I love it. You're a great writer and you write so beautifully. |
by Cindy
Gem, |
by Rachel RTVW
Another beautiful message of love. Although it was written for a contest, I know Marcus was your inspiration. Great job! |
Darling, this has soo much meaning in it! I wish I could relate! lol, Things aren't going to good considering the fact he won't even look at me. I don't think we'll ever even be friends again. Love stinks. Not for you! lol |
by dora
That was so beautiful. it was so loving and heartfelt well done. xx |
+.+ Short and sweet. A very cute, insparational poem. And yes, you can do a poem about Night Terrors, I have no problem with that, and I look forward to reading it +.+ |
Amazing stuff..so cute and it holds such personality. :) |
by Jess
This is really good and i know how you feel. I am in a great relationship that is going to last forever. Great poem 5/5 keep up the good work |
by Ravi
Nice one; but the in the last line, it would have been better if the word "Babes" were avoided. |
by Vanessa
OMG.......ur REALY good at wrighting poems!!....i LOVE THEM.....and I'm sooo jelouse.....haha |
by true lover
GREAT!!! |
by Midnight Sun
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