He Tastes Like You...But Sweeter

by Twisted Heart   Jan 12, 2007


The bottle dangles from limp hands
Upon the cold ground it now falls
Drained of liquid, a thirst to quench
The blurred vision tells it all.

Sweet body gentle, warms my insides
Consuming all the pain I feel
Like therapy, he lends the aid
To help my wounds to heal

A buffer to dark thoughts I have
With dagger breath he numbs the pain
Of when you left me broke inside
He came to ease my heart again.

One last sip, the bottles empty
On the edge of sanity, I teeter
A common state, you've left me in
He tastes like you...but sweeter.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    This was BRILLIANT!!!! I really enjoyed this one, the first stanza had me completely hooked and the last stanza was such a fitting ending to such a perfect poem, you did a wonderful job with this.

  • Amazing, I could really connect with what you were saying. I've read alot of your work and you have some really amazing talent. Keep it up, you're on my favorites, so I'll be watching you closely.
    -Tortured-Princess-