Amazing, I could really connect with what you were saying. I've read alot of your work and you have some really amazing talent. Keep it up, you're on my favorites, so I'll be watching you closely.
-Tortured-Princess-

This was BRILLIANT!!!! I really enjoyed this one, the first stanza had me completely hooked and the last stanza was such a fitting ending to such a perfect poem, you did a wonderful job with this.