Hey darl i thought this was really good. this poem shows the ups and downs of any type of relationship. very well written. a touching piece. and in answer to the bottom question.. she should follow her heart. neway keep up the great work. xx

Excellent job! Really liked this write. I loved the way you ended it with the mystery of the question unanswered.

Aww this one was really good, you are great at poem writting, im not that good but hopefully i get better! lol. well keep up the great work, and ill keep commenting!! :]

Amazing poem. very interesting. n thx for commenting on mine =]

Wow i love this huni.great job x

OHMIGOSH!!
This has to be my favourite of your's I have read.
I thought the flow was flawless, the imagery beautiful and even though it was long it held my interest the whole way through.
Excellent work.