Winter's Day

by debbylyn   Jan 12, 2007


Winter's soul impeccable
Impermeable laden eyes
Woeful blast of crystal tears
Falling gray icicle skies

Sun an impotent memory
Melts not the glacial soul
Buried past, frozen hearted
Cleaves fast to lacquered floe

Windswept the barren haven
Holds frosty tenacious rime
Landscape summons relics
Where entombed Spring abides

Persistent chill adheres the wall
Fervent bleak sanctuary holds
Hope's in contempt eternal
Of Winter's insolent role

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Wat a wonderful poem. well done on this.

    P.S could you vote too on my poem

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Impermeable laden eyes
    Woeful blast of crystal tears
    Falling gray icicle skies

    hurt..........

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Do I want to write a comment?
    Superb, brilliant, beautifully written poem with a description that loses you in the words...stunningly good....
    excellent.... another 10

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Carly

    Really...wow. But I cannot understand it.

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