Oh Debbie I wish I could write with the beauty that flows from you pen. This is an excellent write! Bravo!!!!!

I love the word choice, the flow, the rhythm, the topic and the imagery. Great job!

"Sun an impotent memory,
Melts not the glacial soul.
Buried past, frozen hearted,
Cleaves fast to lacquered floe."
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^ That was my favourite stanza. This poem was amazing. So much depth and so powerful. This was a beautiful write!

-` Liz

You have talent. your better than most people on here. cause most of them suck. Please rate and comment some of my stuff if u get a chance.

Very nicely written. I loved your word choice. The flow as well as the structure. Keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe

Really nice imagery you have here. The first stanza is my favourite!
5/5

"Winter's insolent role" :-) Cool, er cold, um Great!

Really...wow. But I cannot understand it.

I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!!

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Superb, brilliant, beautifully written poem with a description that loses you in the words...stunningly good....
excellent.... another 10

Impermeable laden eyes
Woeful blast of crystal tears
Falling gray icicle skies

hurt..........

Wat a wonderful poem. well done on this.

P.S could you vote too on my poem

5/5 David