This poem was really sad, the last line was so effective, i loved it.

My god that was beautiful. it flowed so well. i loved it. and the imagery behind it was so sad and vivid that it spoke to my soul i feel as if i can empathize completely with this poem. excellent work. it was a true pleasure to read.

rocky

I like the poem it was a really good one and full of emotion

An amazing poem =) I love the end, its really great, emotions straight from the heart, great job