Sweetest Thing

by Tricky Daze   Jan 12, 2007


I wake up in the morning
I see your big smile
Nothing compares the day
I pass with you and i write
What a lucky lover is me

A new day,a new page
Actually it's a note book
That we call it life cage
I'm just a free bird with you
What a lucky lover is me

The rivers got mumbling
When i got near you
They got jealousy like
Anyone too,as I'm whispering
Nothing is better than a
I LOVE YOU
by you

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  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Loved it...a 5/5 from me..short....but then again...straight to the point...uve got loads of poems and ima read them all :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Ahh this is quite interesting in that it's unusual. Very sweet too.
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was sweet i loved it keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so0o sweet.
    It made me smile all the way through.
    I enjoyed the imagery and wording, and I think you expressed yourself wonderfully.

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Awh.
    I thought that was really cute.
    made me smile. :]
    I love love poems.. lol.
    Especially the cute kind. :]]

    good job.

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