As My Heart Slipped into A Comma

by myshiningstar14   Jan 12, 2007


As time stopped,
as my brain rattled,
as my lips quivered,
and as i watched you
being
r i p p
e d
from my sight;
my heart screamed:
"No baby, no say you'll
come back and that
you're not leaving me
here."
Everything felt so unright,
my night started off so well
but now I guess I'm here
to tell,
how the light dimmed and
cut through our hearts.

Been together so long.
Know we'll be together
again soon.
The thought of not seeing
your precious face,
of not holding you,
grabs hold of this gurl
-so addicted,
so in love,
so in need of you.-

Sleepless and filled with
tears,
my heart is hugging my
inside.
my memory is locked into
all the special memories
we've shared;
now its impaired and we'll
be apart for a while.
I will never forget that laugh,
or that smile.

This night started off solumn,
we glided into talking and
comforting;
knowing that "axe of death,"
would be knocking at the door
in a few hours.

Coolness and brokeness drug
through the night;
dancing in the shadow of our
fate.

As my hands ran through yours,
as my soul hung,
as the words: "I love you," drank
me to tears
and as I watched you being
r i p p
e d
from my sight,
my heart wrinkled and shed
a smother of rain,
a drizzle,
for you
my love.

As you drove away,
I wanted to run after.
As you broke from my
glance,
I wanted to scream.
As you withered on into
the night,
I wanted to hold you in
my arms once more,
all while
....

my heart slipped in to a comma.

**just a new style, enoy**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    Becky might be moving back to England, permanently. I know exactly how you feel.

    very heartfelt, very sincere, and so very similar to my situation.

    Tripp

  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    I sees how sad you were when you had to write this. it's good to write the stuff down during your moments like this. it all feels better. don't worry tho, everything will be fixed perfect in a short time. good stuff =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    All i can say is its amazin i can actually feel ur emotion through the poem and the first few lines caught me and i just wanted to keep readin well great poem and i hope u and ur boyfriend are doin well. 5/5