Lost in my sea of my misery
drowning as you watch
pressing my head under
locking the latch
as i hear your laughter
i begin to die
i never thought it would end this way
and so i say
I'm sorry
I'm sorry
I'm so-sorry
i cant stay
there are things worse than death
and i felt them on your breath
(i cant stay)
love is such a power
can it die with the strike of the third hour
i love you but i fear you don't love me
this is what i need to see
I'm lost deep in darkness dieing slowly
i need the light of your love to guide me
from this depth
were i lay waiting for the love that put me here
help me up
this is the poem i wrote for the girl who i know means best but she keeps driving down
and it seems like every time I'm OK she finds a new problem with me i just love her
pleas comment and rate ... i need advice on both the problem and my writing ... its been a while