DAMN THIS WAS GOOD!! SHORT BUT GOOD. THIS TOTALLY DESERVES 5/5. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Great advice and a nice flow to the poem thanks for commenting mine I love your poetry i have read most of them but no time to comment ..by the way I have set up a new poetry forum please take a look and maybe join its at
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cheer john

Very inspirational, and extraordinarily true. Wonderful write.

Great words of wisdom... good job!

This is a perfect poem with a great flow, keep up your best job like always, you are great and your poems are great.

This is a great poem thank you for the comment love linda

Wow.. i lovelovelove this poem.. a lot of advice.. lol.. great job.. definitly my FAVORITE poem

This is a great poem you have tallent
keep up the great work