by Dark Kitten Jan 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She was head over heels in love with him, |
Wow, amazing. I loved it. The words you used were great. The flow was good. Keep up the wonderful work. |
by Goran Rahim
This poem is written greatly, you have a nice talent and keeo it up so i could come back and read more of your great work. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it |
by Gem
You had some nice phrases in this poem, the flow was a bit trippy at times but it smoothed itself over in ways. 5/5 |
by Kelso
This was such a good poem. in a way i kinda know how you feel i really like this guy that i have been close to for ever and i am afraid to tell him how i really feel. any ways great job 5/5. keep writing. |
by Cindy
Bravo! This is avery well done piece. I really enjoyed reading this! |