Secret Wish.

by Teria   Jan 12, 2007


Secret Wish.

The heart I broke.
The love I pushed away.
The dreams I ruined,
And, tears that fell that day.

The words I said.
The faith I crashed.
The one I loved,
completely smashed.

I ended it that day,
along with my life.
I tore you apart,
and hell was rife.

I did all I said
I'd never do.
I did it all,
and, to you.

I stole my dreams,
then stomped on them.
I created fears,
filled with sin.

I brought to myself,
A secret wish.
That I could have,
the one I miss.

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  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I like this poem. but honestly. i think that you tried a little to hard for it to sound good. which it does. but rife means "full of" so it doesnt fit into the sentence you put it in. and them and sin dont rhym. little thing that if you took time to look over it would be that much better.

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Awww Teria *hugs* wonderful poem I wonder who it was for *thinks* 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethany M

    It is sad but it has nice rhythm to it...5/5...if you get the chance you should read and rate one of my poems....i think you would like "The Lies" or "Who To Love" the best

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Sad but beautiful. I especially like the ending. Nice job.

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