Backdrop

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Jan 12, 2007


Backdrop

The
Backdrop
Of My Life
Always seemed to,
Be cloudy and Gray
Until my sun appeared
And began to shine all day.
No more crying, wishing to die,
Finally, i was happy being alive.
For my beautiful sun, shone in the sky.

You
My Sun
Make my days
Warm, Sunny, Bright
Your laughter is
Radiating light
No more rain, sleet or hail
Cause with the sun on my side
I know that i will never fail.
So I thank you, sun for shining bright.
You light my gray, dim backdrop, i call life

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Etheree- a poem consiting of 10 lines in ascending syllable count of one( 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10)

I Guess this is a Double Etheree but its not a mirrored one. ( where it goes in an ascending then descending order)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    A really nice touching peace of writting... very good... keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Great job. ive never seen a poem written like this. i really liked the idea of the poem but think that you should have taken more time on it so it flowed better. but other then that great job. oh yeah and "Always seemed to,
    Be cloudy and Gray"

    there shouldn't be a comma after to. it should be in the line before after life.

    :D great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I like this one... its sweet

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Terrific poem...i loved it!!!! i glad ur finally happy!

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Wow i love this one! very well written and love how it like...is sad and happy all at the same time