Superb job writing this poem. It sounds great and flowed well. Each and every poem you write seems to grab at the heart and let the reader feel just enough to experience your writing instead of just reading it. Keep up the jaw-dropping work.

I liked the forming and everything in the poem. keep up the work.

This is good for a etheree. the sun obviesly represents love. and i like how the poem changed from sad to happy. its amazing how different love can make a person ffeel. good job
Rocky

Excellent, what can I say, its perfectly written and presented.

Lauren again you have proved that you deserve to be the best poet here, this poem is just so great and written greatly. i love your poems.

Awww. That was beautiful! It flowed really well. & You did great on the lay-out of it. It was really pretty lol. It painted a wonderful, beautiful picture of a bright, glowing sun.. clear skies.. green green grass. wind blowing lightly.. yeah you get it. Lol. It was really b-e-a-UTIFUL! xD. Great job on this. Keep it up.

Bri.x 5.5

Wow i love this one! very well written and love how it like...is sad and happy all at the same time

Terrific poem...i loved it!!!! i glad ur finally happy!

I like this one... its sweet

Great job. ive never seen a poem written like this. i really liked the idea of the poem but think that you should have taken more time on it so it flowed better. but other then that great job. oh yeah and "Always seemed to,
Be cloudy and Gray"

there shouldn't be a comma after to. it should be in the line before after life.

:D great job!!

A really nice touching peace of writting... very good... keep it up!