Wow this is a really good poem...5/5... if you get a chance you should read and rate one of my poems...i think you would like either "The Lies" or "Who To Love" the best

I loved this. It was so creative, it gave off such a different way or view of how she was being lost, almost like a dream. That takes talent. Very well written, keep it up, I gave it a 5/5. Also I'd LOVE it if you'd read a few of my poems and comment/RATE them. Thanks alot!!
Rachel