Comments : A Stolen Kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Such a beautiful image. Stolen kisses, i love that line. A short and sweet poem, lovely write
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    This is sooo cute. i really enjoyed it.

    just a suggestion/reminder/question. there is that one long line, that could easily be split in two.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, I thought this was really sweet.
    I loved the last line I thought it really stood out, and the first few lines really pulled me into the poem.
    Wonderful work.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This poem is cute.. nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really different,i appreaciated that,especially those

    You'll climb in my lap
    and fall fast asleep
    Then once again
    I'll have my stolen kisses.

    I liked it,well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Whoever downvoted this is an idiot. The message is something any parent can relate to. I remember having to steal kisses from my son when he was a rambunctious little toddler! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow i loved it. i hope my newborn will do that when he becomes a toddler (cant wait for that to come along, he'll sleep through the night) well it is a 5 from me again, you are so amazing with the way you write, from nikki