by FlirtingWithDeath Jan 13, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
~Trickle~ |
by Espoirfailed
This was so effective, your imagery was outstanding, this poem was dark n meaningful, you have talent. |
by Tammie
I really enjoyed reading this. You used great imagery with such simple words. I had a nice rhythem going whilst reading this poem, nice style. The last stanza is a really good ending for this. Links your emotions and the rest of the story together nicely. =] Great poem. =] 5/5 |