This is another very good poem cindy, it has perfect flow, and the story unfolds perfectly, no flaws, so i give it a 5/5!!! love all your poems, keep it up!!!!

This is awesome and sad because it is based on true events. This should be a lesson to everyone that you never really know who someone is over the internet.

This poem show's alot of emotion and anger, yet still tells your story perfectly. I can agree to some extent, except in probably different ways. It had such a great flow, which made it easy to read. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is so good. the words you use. and the topic, wish this thing never happened to anyone.

but the way you described it was fantastico. 5/5

david

Who would dare try and hurt you?
Thats the problem with nice people, its very easy for other people to take advantage of them.
You portrayed that well in this poem Cindy, it was excellent... as all your poems are
5/5
*Gem*

Cindy,
A poem which tells an all too common story.
You know I love your poems because they are honest and full of powerful emotions, This was no exception.
I'd give it a 10! But I'll have to stick to 5 i suppose.
Much Love, Your dear friend, Tara-Kay
xx

That is pretty good!

Cindy you are so trusting....sometimes too much so. Beware the wolf in sheep's clothing! You did a great job putting this into a poem!

This is sick that someone could do that to someone who is obviously nice! well done on writing a story about this, this is an excllent poem

Good job and nice writing.

This was so sad, I'm sorry he/she used you to do this, and I hope they get caught or have been caught.
Wonderfully written, you had me fixtated right from the beginning.

I'm so sorry this happened to you. the hurt and betrayal in this poem I can relate to so well, I've just been through this and you have described it well how they gain your trust as they know you are wanting that friendship and then they abuse it :( some people just don't have hearts. so glad you realized and are able to move on from this xxxxx