"Like a candle that has burned out,
You totally loose hope and grace,
Longing only for the warmth and comfort,
Of a strong and emotional embrace"

This poem was amazing. The phrases you use and the whole emotion is just wow. That stanza is my fave.
Some brilliant wording!
5/5
*Gem*

I absolutely adore your poems. This is really awesome. And so ture. Take it from someone who knows. Anyway, Love you Shannon XoXo

UR 4EVER BFF

Very good,
keep it up.

Hey this one is my fav. poem of yours keep it up! Your great with words!

*neena

I LOVED this!
I adore the last stanza, it has great impact.
Beautifully written, you have a lot of talent.

**I tried to comment on the other one of your poems, but it kept stealing my text.
I thought that too was beautifully written, so heart wrenching, but such a joy to read.**