by Rona Jan 13, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Walking along shattered dreams, |
by Tricky Daze
So touching and so moving,good job 5/5 |
by x.Athame.x
This really is a heart wrenching write that makes you stop and think about all the homeless. You truly possess a lot of talent when it comes to the written word. Another astounding piece. I particularly liked these lines, they cut right to the soul. |
Wow. You wrote a great poem about the homeless. Great write. 5/5 |
by Jenni
Oh wow. this is amazing. at the end of the poem i felt my heart go out to the homeless. you are so good at describing emotions and allowing people to feel them as well. great job. 5/5 |
by lala
Your poems are so orginal, keep up the good work! 5/5 |