I like this poem, but I'm still unsure of what you are talking about. That's probably just me not interpreting the poem right. But i still love the way you used your words, and the flow of the poem overall. I still rate it 5/5. It's really great. =]

Tammie

Your poem is very good and you are a bery talented writer. Keep up the great work.

This is very clear to me. i know how you feel, and this is sad.

5/5 i loved the overall flow. perfect.

david

Well done, i really enjoyed this one.
it was powerful, although i dont think i understood it perfectly.
you have talent
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This was very powerful, and made me feel even worse for homeless people, because alot arent given a chance to make something of themselves, it is so sad that we waste so much in the world, but there are people dying on the streets everyday, I'm glad someone is finally compassionate enough to write about it. Great work

--Steph

Ps.thanks for the comment on my poem:)

Wow I really liked this poem. it actually reaches out to me. I really liked it. Sorry I said that twice but that was how much it meant to me. Well done. xx

Amazing.
You really put the struggles in life into a better focus for me.
The sad thing is, this is all true. And it sucks.

Amazing.
You really put the struggles in life into a better focus for me.
The sad thing is, this is all true. And it sucks.

And it sucks.

I have never in my life read a poem about homeless people before. I loved it. The emotion was well thought out, as was the depth. Nicely done!

This is very good..your a really talented person..alot of people dont really think about what homeless people are going through.im glad that you wrote a poem about it..good job!

Another great write, alot of people are too ignorant to realise that there are lots of people out there that are the exact same as what you describe in your poem. i thought you did a great job in describing and the flow was good.
5/5

Very nicely written. The flow as well as the strucutre was very good. You are a very talented writter, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Great poem u have here, but isnt it suppose 2 be in the life, society ? well great anyways 5/5

Your poems are so orginal, keep up the good work! 5/5

Oh wow. this is amazing. at the end of the poem i felt my heart go out to the homeless. you are so good at describing emotions and allowing people to feel them as well. great job. 5/5

Wow. You wrote a great poem about the homeless. Great write. 5/5

This really is a heart wrenching write that makes you stop and think about all the homeless. You truly possess a lot of talent when it comes to the written word. Another astounding piece. I particularly liked these lines, they cut right to the soul.

"They are living but truly dead.
Lost in this world with nothing to say.
Wisdom disappears from their eyes,
Because all they see are Shades of Grey."

So touching and so moving,good job 5/5