That was absolutely Beautiful.. You've inspired me.

Awww this poem was great! so inspirational...I think this is the only inspirational poem that I've read that isn't sappy! Congrats! lol But it truely is a beautiful poem...the diction...the rhythm...the message...It's just all in all beauty! I loved the whole ocean wanting to be a stream line. That was just amazing! 5/5 from me!!!!!

Beautiful! I thought this is cute! You did an excellent job with this poem! I love the flow, the imagery and the story as well. Great job!
5/5

This was so pretty... i loved how you described the moon, and i got a message out of this saying "be yourself because somebody elses life isnt always what it seems to be."

awesome! another
5/5
Allanah

Omg that poem is so amazing! i love it, aboslutely love it! the whole idea was great, and i loved how it just rhymed and flowed so smoothly. 5/5 well done :)