This is very very imaginative. the words you use beautifully describe rainbows. perfect.

voted 5/5. great work!

david

This is really good and you stuck to the structure but kept the poem imaginitive. you use great imagery.

Well done, a very hard structure that i have not mastered.
But you did this very well,
great imagery, well done
xxxx

Beautiful poem, you did a wonderful job making everything flow one line after another. 5/5

Amazing poem hun... Beautifully written and a great usage of words also... You always make these 'styled' poems look so easy... Well done 5/5 xx