Thankyou

by David   Jan 13, 2007


With that final imbrace and lingering kiss,
While staring into your eyes engulfing abyss,
The words choked out but meant all the more,
My vision held your glare and never the floor,
:I love you, Its not the end so please dry that tear:
:I love you too and will always hold you dear:
And as i left your sight i wrote this poetry,
In memory of what you mean to me,

Goodbye, Im sorry for your tear stained dress,
Goodbye, I aplogize for this fearful mess,
Goodbye, Ill see you another day,
Goodbye, Think of my love when i look your way,

I, smile and will never forget your voice,
I, look back at these memories and rejoice,
I, no how love you will never lack,
I, have given you my love and it cant be taken back

Will, i ever feel the same way
Will, you ever look at me as u did today
Will, is what ill use to keep my feelings at bay,
Will, I ever be able to ignore this warming ray,

Always, i will keep you close to my heart,
Always, is how long i never want us to part,
Always, is when i think of you as my friend,
Always, it will be till the very end,

Love, so true and forever pure,
Love, the emotion i know will eternally endure
Love, the thing i could never explain,
Love, never to be the source of any pain,

You, turned my dire problems around
You, dug my body from underground,
You, to whom i cannot lie,
You, the one person for whom id truely die,

When i think of you its not the moments of intamacy,
That bring tears to my eyes exessivily,
Its when i remember how we held hands in grip
Or how the words i love you spilt from your lip
There may never be another time to say this so ill do it now
Thankyou my love

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  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    That was so clever how you wrote i will always love you
    this was great i could honestly feel every bit of emotion that you felt when writing this it was just excellent
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    That was great. How you did that with Goodbye I Will Always Love You, so beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Real talent here!!
    really good write with feeling!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    A brillant way of describing love! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Wow, that was brilliant. The flow and the feeling created an experience for the reader. I could almost reach out and touch the emotion; it was that real and heartfelt. Great job and keep up the good work.