Gem it is a awful feeling to say good-bye to someone you love so much. Your love for your nan is so strong she will always be with you. Thinking of you Cindy

Omg that was really sad. im sure ur nan is so proud of u! it was a very touching piece. very well written/ xx

But I don't want to see you live like this
So with one last 'I love you' and a goodbye kiss
I'll miss you so much but I just want you to know
I love you Nanna... and it's ok to let go
^^^
Gem this last stanza brought tears, it really did.
I am sure so many people can relate to certain parts of your poem. But I think it is the last stanza that will help pull many people through the sorrow.

A heart touching piece Gem, and your emotional sadness is felt through-out.

Take care deary
You and your Nan will be in my prayers sweets.

Great job

What a touching dedication to your nan. It helps us to find comfort when we lose someone to know that they will no longer be suffering. I bet your nan is very proud of you. Very heartfelt piece. Nice job, straight from the heart!

This is amazing..i love it so much..it is quit inspiring to me!...
you are true and great writer..keep writing..
i hope every turns out better than you expect it to...
though life is never what we want it to be, bad things always turn out to have good effects...

but i hope you can find a way to be with her. Good luck fellow writer.

~Shannon~

If you have time check out some of my poems. Thanks!

~la vie boheme~

Beautiful poem Gem. I completely understand what you're going through. I lost my uncle to cancer a few years ago. I hope you get to say a meaningful goodbye to her. Good luck sweetie.
xoxo

P.S. My life seems so messed up ever since Jake left. I'm not together at all.

Wow hunni i know how you are feeling, i had to let my uncle, my great grandma and some other people go in my family. stay strong since i know your nan will be so proud of you. and remember if its her time to go she is in a better place and she is your gardian angel. you are an amazing writer and you put lots of emotion into your writing its amazing.
5/5
-chelseaa;

Thnks for your coment!
and im sorry for my mistake but that was because im portuguese and i dont speak english so well :(
by the way ur poems are great!
5/5

Awwwww. I'm sorry you have to lose her. I know all too well what it is to lose someone very dear. It's always best to simply be happy they aren't in pain anymore when the time does come. My heart goes out to you in this. Awesome poem, very heart renching.

I realize letting go is hard but u r right that it has to be done this poem touched me deeply.

I love your poem, it is great, look at mine.

+.+ I hope you can, and you'll see your Nan again. It'll just be awhile before you go to heaven too +.+

Its not a goodbye but a see you later :)) you're hurting but this isint the end :)) the poem is amazing the emotion really shines thru it shows the close bond, shes going but she knows you're strong and you'll be just fine :)))) even i know that ;))))))

Hello...this is so touching, it really is a tough time to say goodbye to someone you want to be around forever, but if you keep in mind that God knows wut he is doing and that his plan is always right, then, your heart will be eased a little, you have my prayers, and love, take care and if you ever wanna talk you know where to find me.

I think that was one of the most sweetest thing but at the same time one of the hardest things to say to the one yu love

I love this poem it actually made me cry...i know how you feel my god mother died few months ago and i have loved her very much...you are right the best thing is to let go...in this poem i can see the love wich you had for her...i also have a poem for my god mother...(just in case you dnt believe me)

Very touching i wrot4e one for my aunt too..its called the Funeral Of Hearts..again great stuf im speechless

lis

Wow what a great poem it really touched me i like it alot keep up the good work

Hey ur poem is rlly great... wud u mind commenting on mi writtin pieces just search for the author 'beautifulxhate' i got a fair few hope u like