Comments : DEAR MY (SHATTERED) HEART!

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is so great i loved it, well done. i liked the idea of your heart beng taped up, i wrote a poem bout that too, i havent posted it tho cuz its not that great but its called my patchwork heart, so kinda similar, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Aww very sweet babes, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Interesting style of writing. The rhythm wasn't perfect but flowed well. I liked the feeling and the power behind the words. Overall great job and keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Very good poem. I feel the same way! =]