by Espoirfailed
This is so great i loved it, well done. i liked the idea of your heart beng taped up, i wrote a poem bout that too, i havent posted it tho cuz its not that great but its called my patchwork heart, so kinda similar, well done |
by XfromwithinX
Aww very sweet babes, well done |
by Kurt
Interesting style of writing. The rhythm wasn't perfect but flowed well. I liked the feeling and the power behind the words. Overall great job and keep up the good work. |
by Sara
Very good poem. I feel the same way! =] |