Hey, that's a really nice poem!beautifully written! keep up the good work! 5/5
celi ****

I like it good style

you say you return the favour mind giving me pointers on how to ryhme as well as you?

take a look at some of my poems tell me what you think

p.s dont stop writeing you have a talent for it x

Its good. been there and have dealt with that to!