Wow, that was beautiful. You have some serious talent. That was amazing and it flowed so well. The feeling made the reader experience the words instead of read them. Absolutely brilliant, congrations.

Wow... that's a wonderful, amazing poem (or song? lol!) it's really well-written, well done!!! keep up the good work cause u really got talent!
celi ****

Ohdear ohdear.
cheer up ebonh.
i'm still here.
:]!
x

I did mis spell that on purpose, so i could correct myself and make you happier by thinking you ahve more comments about the poem.
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EBONGEBONGEBONG.