This is so sad, it was such a captivating poem n it was really really moving. well done

Oh wow, I'm so sorry if this is true. It is stories like these that you see how much of an effect other people's judgements can have. You captured this topic beautifully, great work.

--steph

Very sad write I'm glad for you it is not true. Good job!

I love the way you so vividly tap into the atmosphere and emotions

Wow this poem was amazing it had so much emotion in it you wrote it so well i could imagine in my head what you were saying i loved it you're a great writer very well done 5/5!

I was surprised it wasn't real. it seemed like you really felt it. nicee. love it :)