I just wish she loved me.

by ~Patiently Waiting~   Jan 13, 2007


The girl I'm chasin',
Me and her wont work,
Coz right at the moment,
She's with a jerk.

I fight the urge,
The urge to get violent,
But she says not to touch him,
So I remain silent.

I do as she tells me,
Whatever she pleases,
I treat her so well,
Yet she sticks to the sleazes.

It seems to me,
We'll only ever be mates,
But it just wont work,
Coz she loves who I hate.

I wanna show her,
How happy she could be,
She is my world,
I just wish she loved me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Suicide With A Smile

    Great Poem!!! Like Whoa!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It's really moving and impressing,good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I loved it! It's filled with different kinds of emotions (love, hate..) I just hope she realizes that he's a jerk. Anywayss.. keep up the wonderful work..
    take care..
    luv,,
    haya 3gab =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    You've nailed the feelings on most of my love poems, great job. Your style is fresh and enjoyable. This was a great read. Keep up the good work.

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